Do As You're Told, CH22 (description & excerpt)
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Do As You're Told
Chapter 22: The Fat Lady Sings
Vincent and Cameron are careless; Vincent's relationship with Charlie start to make things complicated.
Arthur learns more about Adam and Robin.
Adam reaps the consequences of quitting Gymno-Mania.
Robin has a surprise visit.
Excerpt:
Vincent then slipped his hands into the briefs and slid them down to his bare feet and then flicked them off. Charlie wasted no time in
dropping to his knees and taking Vincent into his mouth, making him gasp and thrust deeper. Charlie didn't gag as the full cock entered his
mouth - he looked up with his mouth full and smiled with his eyes. Charlie happily sucked and slurped and licked for several minutes before
resting his tongue and jaw.
"Were you always this big?" Charlie asked.
Vincent shrugged so Charlie gripped the spit-covered cock and jerked it with delight. Passion, excitement and pleasure were the motivating
factors in the room and both men were fit to burst.
"Ok. Ok, take your pants off," Vincent said.
"Not yet," replied Charlie.
Do As You're Told
Chapter 22: The Fat Lady Sings
Vincent and Cameron are careless; Vincent's relationship with Charlie start to make things complicated.
Arthur learns more about Adam and Robin.
Adam reaps the consequences of quitting Gymno-Mania.
Robin has a surprise visit.
Excerpt:
Vincent then slipped his hands into the briefs and slid them down to his bare feet and then flicked them off. Charlie wasted no time in
dropping to his knees and taking Vincent into his mouth, making him gasp and thrust deeper. Charlie didn't gag as the full cock entered his
mouth - he looked up with his mouth full and smiled with his eyes. Charlie happily sucked and slurped and licked for several minutes before
resting his tongue and jaw.
"Were you always this big?" Charlie asked.
Vincent shrugged so Charlie gripped the spit-covered cock and jerked it with delight. Passion, excitement and pleasure were the motivating
factors in the room and both men were fit to burst.
"Ok. Ok, take your pants off," Vincent said.
"Not yet," replied Charlie.
Your writing has gotten even better over the years! I liked this series a lot.
ReplyDeleteHonestly, Adam became so relatable and human, and once you uncovered Rhys' plan... I realized I should stop reading. I'm not sure at what point it went across the line for me, as a lot of Nifty content is dark, but you made Adam so life-like and human, and I want him and Robin to have a good ending. I had even hoped it would start to move in that gentler direction, despite my obvious sexual interests.
I usually suspend my reservations and disbelief when reading these, and I have a gut feel that you plan to sabotage Rhys' plan (thus why you uncovered it), so I may peek in to see if that happens... but yeah, the idea of Adam's life being ruined upset me a lot, so you definitely did the job of a great writer in making your characters come alive from the pages.
Hi,
DeleteThanks for reading my other stories and glad you liked some of Do As You're Told.
Adam suffers (but more importantly will survive) abuse and there's worse to come; I didn't make that choice because I get satisfaction from his suffering (which some authors/ readers do enjoy) but because I hoped to tell a relevant story.
I didn't originally intend it to be such a dark story but unlike many Nifty stories I wanted this one to have a sense of accountability for clearly abhorrent behaviour. The villains will get their comeuppance too but I understand that the journey from where we are now to when Rhys/ Micah are finally stopped is a tough read at times.
It's a wonderful compliment that the characters are so realistically drawn you don't want to see them endure bad times. Hope you'll stay tuned for my future writing.
J.
J.,
DeleteWow, thank you for getting back to me so quickly! That's a relief, and I'll definitely keep an eye out then. You're a talented writer, and I enjoy your stories, even sometimes reading the chapters of this one for the sake of a good story, rather than anything more pleasure-focused.
Wrapping up the stories is always a challenge, especially if you plan to go the route of including repercussions, which I've yet to see in a Nifty story. Look forward to seeing how you do so.
-D.
Hi D,
DeleteDo As You're Told is completely written so it won't be left hanging.
It will take a while for the full events to unfold - including things getting worse for Adam who you're right is a sympathetic character - but it'll be ok in the end. It's not all doom & gloom though - there are some lovely moments too.
The story will unfold between now and the end of May.
J.