Noah, the Embarrassed Nudist - CH04 (description & except)
Noah, the Embarrassed Nudist
Chapter 04: Wrestling for Control
Noah attends an EMARP involving wrestling and a costume malfunction... and a familiar face in the audience.
Noah encounters Scott in the woods.
Excerpt:
Markus crabbed towards Noah and Noah inched closer to the bigger lad; Markus grabbed Noah’s upper arms and pulled him off balance. Noah felt himself hit the mat, which softened the fall. Noah looked up at Markus and could see the shape of his balls inside the tightly packed outfit – Markus’s dick was outlined too and it was very nice.
Noah got back up and there followed ten or fifteen minutes of wrestling; Noah got the upper hand a few times but he wasn’t sure if Markus had let him out of pity or if he had just been lucky. The only reason the session went on so long was so the boys could work up a sweat.
Noah could sense when the erotic armistice was over and it was about to get overtly sexual. Markus’s grips became closer and more intimate; Noah found his face in Markus’s armpit and Markus humped Noah’s ass during one manoeuvre that took Noah onto the crashmat again. The audience loved it.
Noah had landed on top of Markus, feeling the older boy’s semi-hard cock pressing against his ass. Then Noah was flipped over and Markus took him from behind. Markus also reached between Noah’s legs and started groping his cock and balls.
Noah’s penis had chubbed up a little during the opening segment but now the meaty appendage was fattening more and becoming clearly visible though the mesh-like perforations of his outfit. Noah struggled to get free of Markus’s hold and when he tried to move, Markus grabbed the left strap and tugged it hard enough to snap it.
The audience hooted with delight as the strap fell from Noah’s shoulder, fully revealing the smooth collar and his nipple. Moreover, the weight of the strap was enough to pull the waistband of the crotch and ass just enough to expose some of Noah’s peachy ass cheek and the inguinal line at his left hip.
cant wait to read it :( nifty seems to be having some issues updating
ReplyDeleteYeah, the chapter hasn't Come out yet and it's already saturday
ReplyDeleteHi guys,
ReplyDeleteI share your frustration. I submitted the chapter(s) 50 hours ago. It's up to Nifty now.
A fellow writer shares that his story has also not been updated so it is Nifty that are slow.
J.
you might need to submit again- the seem to have skipped a few days' uploads.
DeleteAs much as I loved A series of embarrassing events, I hate to say that these new chapters have not been the best. The scenarios are increasingly unrealistic and this recent chapters EMARP seemed super rushed. The scenario was so quick and had little detail in the embarrassing aspect of it. Compared to past EMARPs that were very detailed, full of embarrassing situations, and even spanned multiple chapters.
ReplyDeleteThis is a hard comment to reply to because my biggest concern was that Noah, the Embarrassed Nudist would be a disappointment so “these new chapters have not been the best” is a depressing review. Especially after writing and editing it for nearly 2 years.
DeleteThat said, after writing 38 chapters in the original story and another 33 in this sequel, it’s difficult to make every one Certified Fresh. Noah isn't the novice to humiliation that he was at the begining of the original story so it's harder to embarrass him without making the scenario's ridiculous.
Hopefully you’ll enjoy future chapters more. These stories have always required a suspension of disbelieve. If you think a nudist beach, walking across a street naked or a wresting roleplay are unrealistic, I fear you’ll think future chapters have totally jumped the shark. Lol.