Hugo (Happily) Humiliates Himself - Part Three
Hugo (Happily) Humiliates Himself
Part Three, It's All Over (the Internet)
Hugo's presentation reaches the entire college, leading to wanted attention. However, as the class comes to an end, Hugo is challenged to leave the class just as he is.
Loving the direction you're taking this story.
ReplyDeleteGreat to hear you're enjoying the story. It was a fun to draw out the scenario. I tried to keep it possible, though unlikely, which was part of the fun.
DeleteI really like Hugo, he speaks for his mind when they offend him.
ReplyDeleteAlbeit his humiliation tendency he looks like he has a mature personality
Over the years I've talked to people who love my characters who are complicit in their own humiliation and enjoy exploring exposure in real life.
DeleteHugo is clearly not reluctant about putting himself out there, so I wanted him to speak up for himself. Besides, most people would be defensive about their dick size.
J.
Great story so far! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteIn the first chapter, Hugo was eighteen, but then, starting from chapter two, you made him nineteen. Is that some Nifty shenanigans?
Personally, I prefer characters to be younger—the younger, the better. I really like it when your characters are 16 (or even 15), like Noah and his friends.
It’s not a big deal, though—I just changed him back to 18 in my editor. ;-)
Hi, thanks for reading and I'm delighted you like the story.
DeleteI'm forced to admit the age error is just bad editing on my part. I changed Hugo's age several times during writing & editing. In the final version I intended him to be second year UK university, so 19.
I have no more Noah stories planned, but Magnificently Mortifying Modelling Maladies will continue this year.
J.